Improvements for movie
- Continually evidence - cutting scenes
- Separate shot of bag
- Cut the pathway part.
- Instead have credits in
- Add Alethea at the start getting captured by the skinwalker
What Improvements did I make
One improvement I have made is at the start I added Alethea getting captured by the skin walker so that people can see what the story will be about. Although they'll be confused they'd want to know what happened and why she got captured.
I didn't add credits in on the opening sequence since at the start I wanted the story to dive in straight away. Then after the opening sequence the credits will slowly come in.
I've trimmed down the pathway part at the start of the opening sequence due to it being too long and not much is happening. I still want to show the deceives Rome and Alethea walking to show that they're trying to find the criminal.
I wasn't able to shoot a shot of the bag due to the exact tree being cut down.
For my evaluation I've added evidence of my editing so that there is proof that I've created the cuts.
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